My suggestions for the essay over whaling is as follows:
- Reread and look for paragraph breaks (ie: Different points + topics)
- Be aware of numbers when writing (ie: when they should be written out or not, etc.)
- Watch for repitition
- Avoid slang (this was very minimal)
- Organization (ie: Before going into detail about IWC, perhaps explain what it stands for first. This will ensure that the audience unaware or ignorant of this specific area of work/culture will understand what you (the writer/researcher) are talking about.)
- Transitions: Remember to keep a steady flow throughout the essay. This will allow your readers to read down; without breaking.
- Proper citations
If needed, see Blackboard for more examples. Otherwise, feel free to revise and ask for assistance!
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